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Alex Hormozi Writing Guidelines
Keep Everything Below 3rd Grade Reading Level
- We utilize leverage to gain higher returns on our equity checks 🚫
- We borrow money so we can buy bigger stuff (and make more) than we could
with our cash alone. ✅
Present Voice
- When you’re creating your sales page 🚫
- When you create your sales page ✅
Active Not Passive
- The body was carried out of the room 🚫
- We carried the body out of the room ✅
Avoid Adverbs Whenever Possible (adverbs usually mean lame verbs)
- We shut the door really hard 🚫
- We slammed the door ✅
- Avoid words like “very, super, way, actually, etc”
Simple/Short Sentences
- Usually one comma
- If two commas - cut the middle or make 2 sentences
- We tried to escape but the man, with the red mask, chased us until we lost our
breath. 🚫
- The red-masked man chased us until we lost our breath. We were trapped. ✅